Talk:City Arcade manager/@comment-63.161.170.100-20130414163555/@comment-5281760-20130415203428

@TLM

The major flaw is that at the end, Squeaky as his original mouse form is shown as a still thinking, sentient being, even though clearly his brain had been transplanted. Still, it was fabulous as always!

Now, as for the second one, at first I was thinking of Jenny for some strange reason, but I knew that wasn't true once you said the character doesn't get a lot of screen time, implying he/she is from the show. As for who she is, hmm, that's a tough one (which I like!). Well, she probably isn't a villain, seeing as she had no supernatural abilities to defend herself. My best guess is Leslie or Violet, although Violet's gotten plenty of episodes to herself, and I feeling the girl in your one-shot is far younger than Leslie.

As for your descriptions, I absolutely adore them, especially this one: It almost looked like he had been eating soap, his mouth was so covered in the awful red-tinted lather.

For some reason, that one really struck me and painted a wonderful mental image... and now I'm reminded of how lazy I've been with my descriptions lately. :P  Still, a phenomenal job!

In other news, I have officially decided to continue Believing in the Beautiful Things with a sequel to make the Beautiful Souls series. As of right now, this is what I think the entire series will contain: 2 novel-lenght stories, 2 multi-chapter side stories (I have a feeling you'll like one of these, TLM), and a one-shot epilogue. I'll be announcing the release date sometime in early May, just because I need lots of time to plan out what may be one of my most ambitious projects yet. Hope you'll like it!