Talk:Doctor Two-Brains/@comment-208.32.21.143-20121109040730/@comment-208.32.21.143-20130111064232

Okay. I'm feeling WRITING-Y today!!!! :) So I'm going to randomly write my version of what could of happened after the end of the chapter!!! :)

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"Seriously guys, what happened? And where's Rosali—"

Jenny stopped short, making a noise that sounded somewhat like a cross between a panicked gasp and a terrified squeak. The other exhausted villains watched quietly as she stood there, very still.

Suddenly Jenny yelped and rushed over wordlessly to the scientist, who was laying collapsed on the ground. "Doc...!" she said under her breath.

Two-Brains muttered something unintelligible, all the while clutching his rib cage in the excruciating pain. His broken body was twisted in several different ways, and apparently one or more of his shattered bones had jabbed through his skin, and he was already bleeding quite heavily.

Jenny sunk to her knees, trying to help despite the increasing dizziness enveloping her already-blurry vision. Everything... the very sight of it all, the sickening smell of blood, the mere fact that Two-Brains was injured...

She took a deep breath. 'Ihavetokeepmyselftogether...' she thought to herself briefly. To her dismay, the world began to fade out, it looked... fuzzy... like a staticky TV...

She barely noticed or cared when she sank to the floor with a heavy clunk, unconscious.

'Great.' she thought. The everything blacked out.

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...Yikes. Not only was that totally not well-written (*glares at self*), but it was... totally not well-written. Sorry people! (It's why can't/don't/never write dramatic/violent/character-gets-injured stuff!) D:

Well, I'd better go before I talk myself out of posting this comment completely... :/

~TLM